Tues., Sept. 2, 2008
Homework:
- Read the syllabus thoroughly. Be prepared to take a quiz over the information tomorrow.
- Finish “Are you a writer?”
Wed., Sept. 3, 2008
- Administered syllabus quiz.
- Began writing activity: The Gift.
Handouts:
- Personal Anthology Rubric
Homework:
- Signed syllabus due tomorrow, Thursday, September 4.
- All materials due by Friday, September 5.
- The Gift due at beginning of hour Thursday, September 4.
Thursday, September 4, 2008
- Personal Anthology rubric.
- Gift partner share
- Class share.
- Ordinary Things activity.
- Creativity Tests: See first 3 links in Creativity category to the right.
Homework:
- Hand in Gifts today.
- Begin work on Personal Anthology.
September 5, 2008
1. Gizmo:
- Attributes of a creative person
- Extraordinary for the ordinary
- Gizmo video
- Group Gizmo activity
2. Read: For personal anthology OR articles.Homework:
- Present Gizmos
- Read creativity articles by Monday.
- Bring 3-ring binder and one-subject spiral to class on Monday (10 pts).
September 8, 2008
- Convince us that we need your Gizmo!
- Surrealism: Definition & examples
- Begin Exquisite Corpse
September 9, 2008
- Discuss creativity articles.
- Creativity Commitment project.
- Back to Exquisite Corpse.
Homework:
- Start Creativity Commitment.
- Cluster and draft Exquisite Corpse pieces.
September 10, 2008
1. Hand in Creativity Commitment contracts.
2. Continue culling exquisite corpses.
- Culling: In your journals, copy all words, lines, phrases, combinations, or sentences that you like or find interesting, especially those that are sensory.
3. Workshop: Working privately, cluster.
- Clustering: Concentrate on linking your culled pieces. Don’t be concerned about conventional meanings at first. With care substitute or add words here and there. Write several short pieces or one long piece. Concentrate on putting the thing(s) together first—before worrying about meaning. Be playful—or serious.
Homework: Come to class tomorrow with at least one completed piece (poem). We will talk about “imposing meaning” tomorrow.
Sept. 11, 2008
- A couple of fun “exquisite corpse” types of things:
- Exquisite Corpse Generator
- Wordle
2. Demonstration: How one student found meaning through revision of his exquisite corpse
3. Groups:
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Read exquisite corpse rough drafts aloud once.
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Pass around and read silently once.
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Tell writers what you think each poem means.
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If each poem were yours, what would you do to improve it? Change? Add? Drop?
- Revise exquisite corpse roughs, utilizing most helpful suggestions.
Homework:Bring a revised hard copy to class tomorrow.
September 12, 2008
1. Creativity Quiz.
2. Notes/handout: Differences between poetry and prose.
3. Lesson/notes: Compression and practice.
Handouts:
- Poetry / Prose
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Compression
4. Library: Work on Personal Anthology.
Homework: Compress exquisite corpse poem.
September 15, 2008
1. Pick up handout: Free Verse / Lining.
2. Free verse/lining lesson:
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Definitions
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Examples
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Class sentence
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Practice poem
3. Apply lining to Ex. Corpse poem.
September 16, 2008
1. Pick up 2 handouts, one napkin, and one paper cup.
2. Imagery:
- Observation of the specimen.
- Where’s the poet?
- Auto Wreck by Carl Shapiro.
- Choose the image.
- Write an image.
Assignment: Poetry start #2, the vignette.
- Choose a memorable moment in time.
- Brainstorm images.
- Choose the best images.
- Finesse the images.
- Combine the images into a succinct descriptive paragraph.
- Compress it.
- Line it.
Homework: Come tomorrow with the vignette paragraph.
September 17, 2008
- Metaphor/simile lesson: notes in journal.
- Metaphor game.
- Apply lesson to imagery paragraph.
September 18, 2008
- Pick up handouts. One of them is a two pager.
- Poetry Portfolio explanation.
- Team response notes.
- Demonstration.
- New teams.
- Team bonding activity.
Homework: Continue working on poems in progress. New start tomorrow.September 19, 20081. Writing team bonding activity: Patchwork poems.2. Share and post on wall.
3. Start #3: What does time smell like?
September 22, 2008
1. Personification notes. Consider using this type of metaphor in your “What does time smell like?” poem.
2. Workshop: Work alone or with your writing team on the poetry starts that are currently in progress.
September 23, 2008
- Creativity Commitment reminder. Due Oct. 9. Remember to blog.
- Starts #4, #5, and #6—Grab Bag: Hand, While I’m Sitting Here, and Outrageous Proposition. See Mrs. Kennedy for make-up.
- Personal Anthology/Workshop—if time.
September 24, 2008
- Announcements:
- Imagery will meet for the first time on Monday, Sept. 29, at Barnes and Noble, 6:00 to 8:00 p.m.
- Extra credit opportunity—Check out the Need Feedback? page on Mrs. K’s Blog. If you give feedback to a student writer on the blog, you can earn extra credit points.
2. Workshop today. You have 6 poems in process. Work individually or meet with your team.3. Happy birthday, Mary! September 25, 2008Writing Workshop DaySeptember 26, 2008
- Start #7: Then: Memory is your gold mine.
- Freewrite to warm up (stimulus—toy).
- Share.
- “Then” stimulus questions.
- Examples: Then handout and “Witch Head” by Sara Lemieux, Escape 2000.
- Workshop or silent reading.
Homework: Creativity Commitment due Oct. 9. Work on poetry starts in process. Continue with independent reading—Personal Anthology.
September 30, 2008
- Pick up packet from Mrs. K.
- Start # 8: Concrete Poetry
- Examples: “Suppose Columbus” by Charles Suhor, http://www.readwritethink.org/lesson_images/lesson211/SupposeColumbus.pdf “400-Meter Freestyle” by Maxine Kumin, “from A Continual Interest in the Sun and Sea” by Keith Gunderson, detail from “Manhattan” by John Furnival, etc. http://www.vispo.com/guests/DanWaber/poidog.htm http://www.wendtroot.com/spoetry/folder1/ngjf1.html
- Notes: microsoft-word-concrete-poetry-info.pdf
- Partner practice extreme lining (concrete poem) in partners—See “Nursery Rhyme Concrete Poems” in packet.
- Present nursery rhymes after extreme lining makeover. Explain why you made your lining choices.
October 1, 2008
1. WORKSHOP!!Use your time wisely. Teams meet in the bench areas. Computers are available in the lab for individual work.
2. I will be checking with each of you today for progress. Show me your drafts of each start to date.
October 2, 2008
- Intro to Start #9, Ekphrasis.
- Library: Find an inspiring or thought-provoking piece of visual art—photograph, painting, or sculpture—to serve as the source of Start #9. Make sure you know the artist’s, photographer’s, or sculptor’s name. Secure a copy of the piece.
- Workshop.
October 3, 2008
1. Demo: Examine examples of ekphrasis:
- “Vincent” by Don McLean / “Starry Night” by Vincent Van Gogh
- “Cognitive Dissonance” by Kristin Kittell / “Distant Thunder” by Andrew Wyeth
- “Destruction and Chaos” by Sasha Brandt and Jason Onken / “Tornado Over Kansas” by John Steuart Curry
2. Workshop.3. Reminder—Creativity Commitment is due on Oct. 9.
October 6, 2008
1. Pick up copies of handouts: “Musee des Beaux Arts,” “The Story of Icarus and Daedalus,” and “Art and Poetry.”
2. Ecphrasis models.
- Professionals: “Musee des Beaux Arts” by W. H. Auden and “Landscape with the Fall of Icarus” by William Carlos Williams.
- Students: “A Life Gone Up in Flames for a Cause” by Matt Medendorp and “Fight or Flight” by Keith Van Klompenberg.
3. Brainstorming student selected visual art.
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When you observe the art closely, brainstorm first for imagery—list details that you see, hear, smell, feel, taste.
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Now brainstorm for spatial detail—Describe objects / people / action that you see in the foreground, the middle, the background.
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Place yourself inside the work. Let the characters speak and think. Observe their facial expressions and follow their eyes. What do you see outside the parameters of the frames—to the left, to the right, behind objects, buildings, windows, doors, around corners, down stairs?
4. Workshop.
October 7, 2008
- Announcements and questions.
- Workshop.
- Creativity Commitment project due Thursday.
- Personal Anthology: Show progress (halfway) by Monday.
October 8, 2008 1. Handouts: “Repetition, Rhythm, and Rhyme” + “Counting Haiku 2007.”2. Today we will practice sophisticated poetic skills necessary for the last three starts. Can you count? Can you divide words into syllables? Yes? Then you are ready for traditional meter and rhyme.3. Start by printing your name in your journal, first, middle, and last. Now divide your name into syllables. How many syllables are in your name?4. Now you’re ready for the ultimate test of counting and syllabicating—haiku. Your in-class assignment is to write a haiku for and about one other student in class. See handout for examples. Syllable count 5-7-5. Include images that show something telling about your subject.5. Draw names to determine each student’s subject and then write.6. Share aloud and hand in haiku—to be compiled into the 2008 collection.
7. Since you’ve proven you can count and divide words into syllables, you are ready for the next step–rhythm/meter. Notes.
10. Partners—monometer poems: See “Repetition, Rhythm, and Rhyme” handout.
October 9, 2008
- Creativity Commitment informal presentations.
- Hand in C. C. product.
Reminder: Personal Anthology halfway check will be this coming Monday & Tuesday—in alphabetical order.
October 13, 2008
- Sub today.
- Workshop.
- We will finish Creativity Commitment presentations tomorrow.
- Anthology halfway check tomorrow.
October 14, 2008
- Hand in Creativity Commitment projects.
- Leave Anthology halfway materials on the counter.
- Finish monometer poems. Save.
- Present monometer poems to class—LCD projector. Read aloud and identify meter.
- Notes: Types of rhyme and rhyme pointers.
- Rhyme game.
October 15, 2008
- Rhyme challenge.
- Start #11: Villanelle.
- Define and explain form—handout.
- Professional examples—handout “Rhyme, Repetition, and Rhythm”: “Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night” by Dylan Thomas, “One Art” by Elizabeth Bishop, “The Waking” by Theodore Roethke.
- Student model: “When Us Little boys got all Grown Up” by Bubba Ogborn and “Pointless” by James Cotton.
- Student model share, using past issues of Escape.
- Begin working on villanelle.
October 16, 2008
- More student models of villanelles–Escape.
- Workshop.
October 17, 2008
- What did Elizabethans do for fun? Write sonnets?
- Final start–the sonnet. Examine structure: handout: “Sonnet Fever.”
- Professional models: “#130″ by Shakespeare, “Well, I Have Lost You” by Edna St. Vincent Millay, and “One of the Seven has Somewhat to Say” by Sara Henderson Hay.
- Student models from Escape.
- Begin.
- Workshop.
October 20, 2008
- Poetry portfolio is due by Friday, October 24.
- Poetry portfolio technicalities / questions.
- Workshop.
- Teacher response available during Workshop.
October 21, 2008
Workshop today. Computer lab available.
Poetry portfolio deadline: Friday, October 24.
October 22, 2008
Workshop. Poetry portfolio due Friday.
October 24, 2008
- Poetry Portfolios due today.
- Class read-around: Choose one poem to read to the class.
- Journal: What skills from the Poetry Workshop can we carry into prose? Discuss.
- Read aloud: “30-.06 Friend”
- Is this story fiction or nonfiction? Where do you think the author come up with this idea? Where did he get the ideas for physical detail? For dialogue?
October 27, 2008
- Discuss last Friday’s story and the power of observation.
- Pop observation quiz: Mr. Boxer.
- The Observation Journal assignment. Requirements: (1) Minimum half page per day for seven days. (2) Record only detail—no judgments. (3) Due Monday, Nov. 3.
- Field Trip: As a class, walk the hallways. Drop out along the way to observe and record.
- Share one interesting detail from Field Trip.
- Introduce first prose piece, the autobiographical narrative.
- Read aloud “The Way Things Change” by Kristen Foutch.
- Last ten minutes, writing teams tell each other stories.
October 28, 2008
- Pick up handouts: “The Art of Profanity,” “A New Home,”The Day I Stood Up Danny Pearson at the Altar.”
- Read and annotate “The Art of Profanity.”
- Discuss.
- Writer’s Decisions for Autobiographical Narrative—criteria.
- Models—group evaluation.
October 29, 2008
1. Tips for autobiographical narrative.
2. How to do a brainstorming timeline.
3. Deadlines for narrative:
- Rough draft for team response—Friday, Oct. 31
- Final Draft—Nov. 3
4. Workshop. October 30, 2008
- Passed out autobiographical narrative double rubrics.
- Workshop.
- Autobio. narrative rough draft due tomorrow at the beginning of the hour.
October 31, 2008
- Autobiographical narrative rough drafts due.
- Writing team response.
- Revision time—computer lab.
November 3, 2008
- Auto. Narratives due.
- Importance of dialogue: handout + notes.
- Models: Readers’ Theater of “The Long Walk to Forever” and recording of “I Want to Be a Quantum Mechanic.”
- Dialogue assignment: Two people in conflict—a verbal dance. Make characters distinctive through speech.
- Select co-authors. Brainstorm and begin—computer lab.
November 4, 2008
- Finish dialogues—Lib. computer lab.
- Begin presentations.
- Discuss the nature of the conflict between the characters. Does the speech sound natural?
November 5, 2008
- Finish dialogue presentations and discussion.
- Handout: Short story rubric. Questions.
November 6, 2008
- Fiction options: Traditional short story, short-short story, collection of flash fiction.
- Read models.
- Questions.
- Writing teams pre-writing meeting.
November 7, 2008
- Handouts: End of trimester calendar. “How to Write Flash Fiction.”
- Plan time for completing anthologies and fiction assignment. Give one copy of calendar to Mrs. K.
- Workshop—begin work on original fiction piece.
November 10, 2008
- Returned poetry portfolios.
- Introduced trimester exam.
- Continue workshop.